ermmmm, wasnt really feeling this to be honest, your song edit was off and needs to be worked on but i know it can be hard, i just felt the the first part of the video before the chorus was just random, nothnin seemed to go at all, it got a little bit better when the fast pace kicked in but then u lost it and it went all wierd and the pace went. not the worst video ive seen but im sure u can do much better.