Randy Orton - Broken

First time posting a film here. Constuctive critisism will be welcomed

http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=BjtXIef8ik4&feature=channel_page

i stopped watching during the horrid intro.

I have to disagree with ѕynysteя. I thought the video was good. The synching was pretty nice, and it was good song choice. Only thing I say is try to vary the effects more.

it wasnt that bad man, however i cant bare to watch videos with a god dam watermark over them...please dont do it. i didnt think the text worked was too simple and plain need to be jazzed up a little. sync wasnt always on but in parts was solid...overall not bad tho.

beedo316 wrote:

it wasnt that bad man, however i cant bare to watch videos with a god dam watermark over them...please dont do it. i didnt think the text worked was too simple and plain need to be jazzed up a little. sync wasnt always on but in parts was solid...overall not bad tho.

thanks alot for sharing your opinion I'm still in admittance.. after 10 months or so I'm still a bit of a noob lol. and I'm always gonna have a watermark on my videos, although in my next ones I'm gonna maybe die it down a little. I've had people saying it was too big and such. so yeah, thanks x]

u shudnt need to have a watermark..it ruins the video...if u do have one..have it as small as possible and as unnoticeable as possible..

beedo316 wrote:

u shudnt need to have a watermark..it ruins the video...if u do have one..have it as small as possible and as unnoticeable as possible..

Unfortunately I'm used to alot of people stealing my videos whenever I don't put a watermark on So I do have to have one, because I can't stand people taking credit for other peoples work. So I'm gonna die it down, but I'm afraid I'm always gonna have a watermark.

Not Bad man I liked it 4/5

hardyzvideos wrote:

Not Bad man I liked it 4/5

thank you =]

Nice job man, I like it a lot once the main music kicked in, I enjoyed it.

JamieWilmot wrote:

Nice job man, I like it a lot once the main music kicked in, I enjoyed it.

Thanks x]

Not my fav it was pretty good

XJHcomV1 wrote:

Not my fav it was pretty good

Ahh right. well thanks for the comment anyways

this vid is deff not near the best pretty uhh dull im trying to be nice as possible compared to what i have seen,but good effort ugh that song,the intro,maria, is just a big no no

i like it man 4/5

ѕynysteя is a fucking ass
nice vid 4/5!

ANT389118 wrote:

ѕynysteя is a fucking ass
nice vid 4/5!

ha, yes.. YES HE IS. n thanks everyone for being truthful, n not saying it's shit just cos' you don't like me personally lol.

This was actually a really cool video man. I loved the transition from your promo to the music video, and your vid told a really solid story.

leelee wrote:

This was actually a really cool video man. I loved the transition from your promo to the music video, and your vid told a really solid story.

Whoa, really huge coming from you lol. thanks alot x] I could have done better with this vid I think, personally.. I didnt spend much time on it to be honest. but still, THANKS ALOT x]