Kai Koshimoro Moderator
Posts : 105 Join date : 2008-10-14
| Subject: My non existent Summer Series Entry-No Limits Tue Oct 14, 2008 9:23 am | |
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Styles4671 Site Owner/God
Posts : 695 Join date : 2008-10-13 Age : 33 Location : New Orleans, Louisiana
| Subject: Re: My non existent Summer Series Entry-No Limits Tue Oct 14, 2008 9:28 am | |
| Well I don't hate it, but I don't like it. I do like the first 7 seconds a lot. The intro was pretty nice but it went downhill from there. It was spot after spot after spot and got really boring. I liked how you were trying to tell stories in the verse. I think you can do better than this man. | |
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Raith Senior Member
Posts : 258 Join date : 2008-10-24 Age : 32 Location : South Carolina
| Subject: Re: My non existent Summer Series Entry-No Limits Mon Oct 27, 2008 10:50 pm | |
| beginning was great other then that it was average to me | |
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