A decent try but you've got a long way to go.
The song has been not only whored in MVs for years but used repeatedly by WWE. I used Bodies for my first ever MV and it wasn't a good choice for the same reasons. The edit on the song you did was poor (at 7 sec) and kind of cut off the momentum a bit. But it wasn't catastrophic because the beat remained the same. Not really anything else to say that hasn't been said. Felt a bit hackneyed, have seen so many Cena MVs like this. But just keep going, get more comfortable, find a style and make original MVs. Best of luck to ya.