Well... i give it a 5/10!
- don´t play with color and effects when you cant handle it! (dont use b/w as an standart effect)
- try to color youre stuff always the same (some blur, some over-glowed... it looks like you wanna try out APR)
- try to cut with the same style... (some on beat, some on pace...)
- some cuts to fast 4 that track...
- music cut --- failed!
--- but you have potential so keep on working @it!
// u´re welcome!