{DPE} Freestyle - Breath(Feedback Please)

Work Hard on this for about 3 days

it was ok, for clips like the one at :08 should be croped to get rid of that border, it annoys me lol. alot of the black flashes you used werent really on the beat which ruined that for me. the sync was off and there wasnt really a good set pace. i kept waiting for that little water mark to go away, i dont like it when people watermark their video, its alright to have something like that play at the first few seconds, but then you should fade it out. i kinda liked the swanton you had goin there at the ending, but then you threw in two completly random and unnecisary clips which kinda ruined the ending. but it wasnt bad, i do see some effort involved which is what i like to see. keep it up.

^^ok thanks sorry about the watermark

any more comments???

ermmm pace went on and off and your sync needs working on but wasnt that bad, the watermark was really annoying, and as already noted u should have cropped the clips with the boarder. keep working at it tho and im sure you will get better

^^Thanks Beeds ive only been making vids 4 about 4 months so i know i can improve

ye it was good but could have been alot better and as beeds and IC said the watermark was fucked up if u absoluetly need to watermark your video just put a tiny little on in the corner,but i dont think u really need one,look at it this way,if a leecher steals ur vid that probably means that the vid is good,like why else would u steal it?? i take stolen vids as a compliment XD

anyway the vids pace wasnt that great and i saw alot of the same superstars,i think u should work longer on ur vids,cos u got skills,u need to show them better

^Thanks Sean and I Promise i Will finish our joint vid.....someday lol

Nice job,you're improving.The sync was very good,just like the pace.The beat's should be better,just like the music editing.

Overall:Nice,good lyrics but bad music editing. 3/5