umm...i thought you over-synced it, hitting every guitar note and completely ignoring the pace of the song. some of the effects were decent and added to the video but others took away from the video and were a pain on the eyes. also from the beginning to end of the video your editing got slowly better, im not sure if parts you just weren't trying or what but try to work on your consistency. also stuff like the "last monday" text and the tv-14 logo is really distracting when im trying to focus on your mv. thats all, ok video definately a lot that could use fixed.